Tar black coats your body in inky perfection. A night like this deserves a memory that lasts. That’s what you were thinking when you took your first sip at least. Things changed after that. Swig after swig, burning liquid breathed fire down your throat and into the depths beyond. Swirling frantically, thrashing within in a violent frenzy. Keep going, your mind is coaxing you, persuasion in the form of a seductive glass bottle. All you need to be happy is that one final sip. And just one more for luck, and then one more for prosperity, and then one more because damn it feels good to be alive. The night slowly fades, moon sinking like your battered eyelashes. You were stumbling to your bed, fumbling for something to hold onto before you collapsed on the floor. I remember your smile as it slid out of tune, giddy in the approaching dimness. Tossing your head back you took that one last sip. You crumpled before my very eyes, disintegrating into darkness.
Really cool, well done!
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Thank you!😊
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🙂
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That was a very detailed description!
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Thanks 🙂
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Powerful and descriptive!
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Thank you 😊
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Wow. Captivating.
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Thanks 😄
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Don’t want that feeling, thank you. And thanks for expressing it, and so well. Also like the poems above this entry. Keep up the good work.
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Thank you so much! I’m not sure if I just missed it, but is there a way to comment on your posts? I’m not sure why WordPress won’t connect me right to it I have to just type the url in safari to get there. Then it says leave a reply but when I go to log in it doesn’t accept my information. I like to think I’m good with technology, but sometimes the most obvious things allude me!
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Do you mean my posts on my blog site?
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Yes.
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I mean I think so.
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It worked for me… from the leave a comment in the small type tagged as etc at the bottom of the post…
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I think you need to be on hwbrycewrites.com, NOT hwbrycethe writer…I think…
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Hmm what it appears to me is that my account needs to be through your site. Something pops up saying my email address is not associated with Books, Blogs and Butterflies and that it needs to be configured or something. So it may be that you could comment because you are the creator of the site. Is there something in your comment settings allowing only admin to reply?
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Hi Serena. I’m not sure what is going on there. It should be as simple as commenting and posting, of course. I’ll ask my son to test it.
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